Sunday, January 31, 2010

Song of service II

(to noro and nandi)

It rained today
and my heart went back to you
when as a compatriot slave
your beauty enlighted me
every drop of your love
replaced sweat with necta
and in your face i gazed
into a flower of hope

the sky threw diamonds
and my totem perched under the shade of a green memory
still worlds await my soaring plum
but know today that in every
drop the sky lavished is ur
devotion our unforgotten affection.

3 comments:

  1. David, your imagery drives the emotion home so beautifully! It's a successful lyric poem any day. Would visit often to read more

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